Changing GTS
TOP SENTENCE
I’d like to develop a better, more usable, and attractive field so every student can have extra
space to play their games/sports plus enjoy being active.
SUPPORTING SENTENCE 1
The fields at the moment aren’t very tempting,
because there are no objects but two soccer goals.
I wish to change that by adding new and amusing items so everyone has something active to do instead of sitting under trees.
SUPPORTING SENTENCE 2
The first structure I’d like to add would be rugby posts on each side of a field. Rugby posts will increase the number of students coming to the field, because they can practice their conversion kicks plus you can make the the bottom of a rugby post a soccer post!
SUPPORTING SENTENCE 3
Second, making the fields larger will give others a chance to play sports that need high amounts of space; e.g. cricket, and hockey. It also means that you can fit more sport structures and physical objects. My last thought is putting in Sport gears with our names on so if sports gear gets lost, we’ll know who did it or who’s it is.
CONCLUSION
That’s all I’d wanna change about Glen Taylor School’s fields. It’s not too expensive and not too cheap.
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